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You leave me
Breathless.
As though the wind itself stole my words,
And sang a song to share your glory
Among those that wish to be told;
While summer spills across our faces
And even dusk seems to shut off
The rest of the world.
This is my life with you
On a beach made for two, just you and I
And sunshine.
And in the night, we make our own heat.
Give off a glow all our own
Through the sound of muffled whispers, laughs
And moans.
Your moan is mine then.
So subtle and tasteful, gorgeously placed mid sentence
So as you speak, you leave me
To imagine the words flowing freely
While a calmer you preaches and teaches me with them.
"I will take you.."
And do as you wish; do as I want.
Keep me wrapped in covers, draped in evening
So as the sunlight breaks over the horizon
And fills our quaint home with illumination, I am
Whole.
©2007-2009 =VampireProdigy
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"You and I, once upon a time."

Not sure what exactly inspired this piece though I do know that I like writing about things like this. Free flowing words keep me thinks and really just let me go with the flow. :3
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i like it...but was this "“I will take you..” " intentional?
>>; I'll fix it oneday.

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nice, i love your poems

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Living a lifes not hard enough, burn me a light inside!!
Well, thank you. :3

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